Fallen Angel

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“I am very surprised with you uh… You know I don’t think you introduced yourself before you tried to destroy me. Now why don’t you tell me your name my dear.” Caionna said to the figure kneeling before her.
“Aranys. I am Aranys.” She responded an awed tone.
“Well then Aranys I am Caionna you may refer to me as Mistress Caionna, Mistress, my lady, or any other title you feel would be appropriate to refer to how glorious I am to you.”Caionna spoke proudly,” Now then where was I before the introductions?”
“You were saying that I surprised you my Goddess.” Aranys spoke reverently.
“Oh referring to a demon as a goddess you blaspheming flatterer and helpful even before I finish with you.” Caionna said happily. “But you really are surprising for an angel you know that? Most of your kind likely wouldn’t have even let me have last words let alone what you did. You caught me off guard and had your blade at my throat and yet you didn’t kill me. Really I was rather desperate with the whole teary eyed I’m sorry please help me change my ways trick but I am so glad it worked.”
“I was taught to help those who asked for it and you seemed sincere.” Aranys said dully
“It seems they didn’t teach you not to listen to my kind though. Not that it matters anymore you had your chance to defeat me and you failed to do so. Once we started speaking you lost. You looked me in the eyes you let my words just flow into your oh so receptive mind all because you thought you could save me from what I am. ” Caionna gloated. “I think however I will let you help me. Yes from now on your going to be mine just give yourself up to me, accept my essence into the very core of your being and you will be mine for the rest of eternity.”
“Whatever you wish my Goddess I give myself to you for the rest of eternity.”